Second of a Trilogy

prince of darkness
uncoils his ruthless strategy
to sabotage creation’s bliss.
Seductive voice burns into heart
challenging: Has God said ?
contradicting: You shall not die !
~~~
Mesmerised, tantalised
as wily tempter weaves
his beguiling charms
on innocent’s psyche.
desires overwhelming
new emotions stirring
reasonings controlling, till
battered will succumbs
~~~
Relationship’s ruination
through wilful disobedience,
hiding away – shame-filled
pointing finger of accusation
shifting blame away from self
symptoms of guilt ridden-ness,
and profound shift of nature
~~~
All creation groans
beneath the weight
of homo sapiens’
dreadful fall
waiting for the
promised redemption

Your poem rolled like thunder, bursting bolts of intensity across the page. Absolutely profound writing. Thank you!
Very well written- Intense imagery..
The image goes perfectly with the words
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Happy Writing.
You have portayed the creation of the world and man’s efforts to bring it down so brilliantly.
Well done, Alec.
magical ending,
beautiful sentiments….
lovely delivered poem,
thanks for sharing!
Happy Wednesday!